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Holy shit, that post was out of the fucking chain!!


Kid Pid

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BrandBox

1 month ago Moderator

I’m glad you all enjoyed it!

BrandBox

1 month ago Moderator

Khaleeb - go to this post

Kid Pid

Kid Pid

This knocks out everything else in the park.


Khaleeb

1 month ago (deleted by Khaleeb)

Khaleeb - go to this post

Michael Myers Is Dead

Listen to the hush wind of the night. You can hear the voices. Many chattering, blabbering voices. They make you sick. God, how you hate people. You go watch the news, people are beasts. You go online, people are beasts. Yet when you go outside, they put on a mask of humanity. Why is it even called that? Goodness, they put on a mask of goodness. All the great men confirm it to you. It's in the books of every great philosopher. Self-interest, and petty emotions are what drive human beings. The blood that courses through a human's veins is the blood that pumps arms that commit the horrors. Men electrocuted until their faces burn, tortured young boys and girls, sadistic rapings. You turn to the morals of men in your crisis, but even they are no help. After all, Hitler was an ultimately moral man. He just needed to get his facts straight. The bugs crawl. Where? Who knows, perhaps under your skin. The Knife slips past shadows and into the light of reality. He's always behind you. But you realize the greatest horror of all. In the mirror, the twisted flesh looks like a Picasso if Picasso were a maniac. Michael Myers is dead. So, where is evil now? Well, when you look in the mirror, look behind you, there it hides. Or, perhaps, it's looking you right in the face.

easily the most pretentious and gayest story yet, terrible bait


Mungsley - go to this post

easily the most pretentious and gayest story yet, terrible bait

Lol I just wrote something spooky for halloween. You niggas need to give it a rest. Following me around and hating constantly. I'm a 16 year old dude. This is just getting kinda sad.

Khaleeb

1 month ago (edited by Khaleeb 1 month ago)

Probably did suck though, wanted it to actually drop on halloween so only wrote it in like 10 minutes. Though not sure where you got the pretentious part from.


Khaleeb - go to this post

Probably did suck though, wanted it to actually drop on halloween so only wrote it in like 10 minutes. Though not sure where you got the pretentious part from.

Idk man all the discourse surrounding human nature n shit. just write a story about a serial killer or some shit, and also second person is really, really hard to pull off effectively so I suggest sticking to first or third, probably third if you don't write often. Also the premise of the story made no sense, tf was it even about?


Khaleeb

1 month ago (edited by Khaleeb 1 month ago)

Mungsley - go to this post

Idk man all the discourse surrounding human nature n shit. just write a story about a serial killer or some shit, and also second person is really, really hard to pull off effectively so I suggest sticking to first or third, probably third if you don't write often. Also the premise of the story made no sense, tf was it even about?

Yeah, retrospectively Ima remove all the "You"s, Wasn't actually saying anything about human nature. It's supposed to be about an insane shut-in. I agree, could have been better. Thanks for actually giving feedback. I'll rewrite it. Though now I'm not sure if what I'm going for really works in the esotales format. Deleting it till I can deliberate this through.


BrandBox

1 month ago Moderator

Khaleeb - go to this post

Yeah, retrospectively Ima remove all the "You"s, Wasn't actually saying anything about human nature. It's supposed to be about an insane shut-in. I agree, could have been better. Thanks for actually giving feedback. I'll rewrite it. Though now I'm not sure if what I'm going for really works in the esotales format. Deleting it till I can deliberate this through.

Literally anything works as an esoTale format, honestly. As long as the writing isn't less than 5 sentences long

BrandBox

4 weeks ago Moderator

IcedLava, thoughts?


IcyLava'd

4 weeks ago (edited by IcyLava'd 4 weeks ago)

This is cool. Is it kind of like a masterpost for random tales people make on here?


BrandBox

4 weeks ago (edited by BrandBox 4 weeks ago) Moderator

IcyLava'd - go to this post

This is cool. Is it kind of like a masterpost for random tales people make on here?

Yes! A few select authors are able to write stories. They can be any genre.
I'm still debating if the fictional stories are connected to the main esoLore megaverse (Like the Neilseph stories) or the equivalent of a spin-off.


IcyLava'd

4 weeks ago (edited by IcyLava'd 4 weeks ago)

BrandBox - go to this post

Yes! A few select authors are able to write stories. They can be any genre.
I'm still debating if the fictional stories are connected to the main esoLore megaverse (Like the Neilseph stories) or the equivalent of a spin-off.

Very cool. I'd prefer it to be more of a spin-off but I'm obviously biased


BrandBox

4 weeks ago Moderator

IcyLava'd - go to this post

Very cool. I'd prefer it to be more of a spin-off but I'm obviously biased

I do plan on creating stories include strong lore points involving Neilseph. I don't know if Adolf would want them to be canon, however. He's the lore man around here.

BrandBox

4 weeks ago Moderator

I'm honestly fine either way.


BrandBox - go to this post

I do plan on creating stories include strong lore points involving Neilseph. I don't know if Adolf would want them to be canon, however. He's the lore man around here.

BrandBox - go to this post

I'm honestly fine either way.

Ah okay. Makes sense


BrandBox

6 days ago Moderator

"Miscellaneous"

Has anyone ever told you the story of the /misc/ territory?

It was an ugly war. Hundreds of people spray painted the territory with obscene things. No rules, no laws, every man for himself. Killings left and right.
It was created as an experiment by the administrators and moderators.’ How would the citizens react if we gave them no rules?’ They thought.

The territory only lasted for a few months. In that timeframe, hundreds of repeating spray paint saying the same phrase like ‘UNSUS ME AND THE RAIDS WILL STOP’. Many were given the orange sticky of honor, which highlighted it’s quality and importance.

But then, A smear campaign was made. The higher-ups realized their mistakes

They nuked the place. Hundreds suspended, one moderator demoted.

It was a dark day.


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11/10
Would read again


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